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(BOOM! A crash of lightening hit the ground as the two men fought)

Nakura:You cant beat me brother! (Slashes at his stomach connecting to it...)

Zatsuna: (Cringes in ppain falling to the ground..) I Will defeat you! (Gets up and stabs him in the stomach)

Nakura:(As you stabbed me i would stab you both of us dieing)

Narrator:(As the fell to the ground thunder and lightening clash against the sky.....)

Narrator:(20 years later)

Shakuda:(Walkinging through the village alone..) What if father doesn't come home this time? (Looks up at the sky...)

Rin: Hey! Shakuda! ( A women runs up to shakuda excited)

Shakuda: What is it? (He would look at her...

Rin:Kikansi is fighting sensei Jakura in the courtyard! (She would stop panting)

Shakuda: Well lets go!

(The would both run to the courtyard watching the fight...)

Kikansi:(Dodges jakura's atack and would poke his forehead making him fall back....)

Jakura:(Hits the ground getting up instantly punching him in the jaw...)

(The fight would go on for a couple of mnutes more after the Hokage 'Jalister'would stop them)

Jalister:What is this?! (He would walk into the crowd sounding mad..)

Shakuda:I think it was a fight..(Replied shakuda walking into the center of the crows bravely)

(Shakuda was only a genin and the two men fighting were chunin...)

Jalister:I see, well shakuda... Why dont you tell me why they were fighting...(He would look at shakuda irratated)

Shakuda: I dont know, cuz they like fighting? (He would smirk)

Jalister: Dont be a smart ass......

Rin: In all respect thats just how shakuda is...... (Rin Would walk out from the crowd...)

Jalister:I see, well, kikansi and Jakura, come with me... (He would walk out of the crowd..)

Kikansi and Jakura:Yes sir... (They would glare at rin and shakuda.)

Shakuda:(Starts to walk away...)

Rin:Shakuda!(Catches up to him) What were you thinking?

Shakuda:I was just speaking my mind....

(Shakuda would walk to his house eating dinner and walking upstairs going to his room locking the door as rin would be in the room..)

Rin:Alright, so, We have studying to do, the test is tomorrow.... (She would be reading a scroll)

Shakuda:(Would sit next to rin and after and hour or two of studying they would pass out)


Narrator:(To be continued.....)

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